Middle Sister's Mid-month Read

Death by Chocolate Raspberry Scone by Sarah Graves Just published latest entry in the Death by Chocolate Mystery Series, but I am going to admit straight away that this one left me a bit cold. Generally I like that Jake is clumsy and can't jump across a creek or tumbles down a ridge while skulking her way to investigate something. But in this buck, it's taken to extremes; I swear she's falling or getting dumped in the ocean every other chapter (or at least, that's how often it felt). And she never sleeps; she's going days on 3 hours of sleep and beers and other alcoholic drinks in place of food and a power nap. At one point, I wondered if Jake was becoming an alcoholic and that would be a future subplot. To keep the story in line with the series, Jake and Ellie are given a new chocolate challenge by a client (the chocolate raspberry scones) but despite repeated reminders that oh, yes, we have to make 4 dozen scones in 24 hours and we don't even have a recipe, the investigation takes priority in a way we haven't encountered before. Until the last few chapters, when solving the murder becomes very personal for a very good reason, this shrugging off a professional responsibility isn't necessary and even makes no sense to two characters that have always been portrayed as very professional. I'd describe this story as a grim adventure, with pirates and gold coins and a local witch, but it's all menacing in a way earlier stories haven't been. One word: Sharks. Two words: shark attacks. Three words: repeated shark attacks. I actually found the shark attacks to be very unrealistic. Jake is able to enunciate clear sentences to Ellie when a shark is just centimeters from her face and about to chomp down? There's an also a lot of nautical terms, the meaning of which this desert dweller had no clue. The murders were too easy to solve: two of the three murders and key plot elements were so easy to guess this time that I knew exactly what was going on, the motivations, etc. by the fourth chapter. I know I read a lot of mysteries, but I never try to solve it and I happily suspend disbelief when reading, so if I can figure it out without even trying, that's not a good sign. I still like the series and will read the next, but I feel this one is pretty weak. (Net Galley)